Peer Evaluation
In our peer assessment, we averaged 46 out of 60; which is inside a level 3 at the top end. We then reviewed the comments and noted the most reoccurring ones.
Key points:
· Looks too much like a trailer
· Take out or change the voiceover
· Take out the interview
· Too fast at points
· Lighting in the bed is too dark
· More of Megan in the lake
How were these fixed?
· We took out some of the alter egos to make the sequence look more like an opening scene, focusing more on the main character
· The voiceover has been removed to create more enigma codes about what is wrong with the main protagonist
· Interview was removed and replaced with scenery shots instead
· We ignored this because we believed the pace was acceptable with the confused nature of the scene
· This was removed and then re-filmed with more lighting, in exactly the same concept
· We added a few extra snippets of the lake shot towards the end of the scene
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