Poster
This is our poster to help aid with advertisement for our film Divided.
Monday, 16 December 2013
Peer Feedback
Feedback
Peer Evaluation
Peer Evaluation
In our peer assessment, we averaged 46 out of 60; which is inside a level 3 at the top end. We then reviewed the comments and noted the most reoccurring ones.
Key points:
· Looks too much like a trailer
· Take out or change the voiceover
· Take out the interview
· Too fast at points
· Lighting in the bed is too dark
· More of Megan in the lake
How were these fixed?
· We took out some of the alter egos to make the sequence look more like an opening scene, focusing more on the main character
· The voiceover has been removed to create more enigma codes about what is wrong with the main protagonist
· Interview was removed and replaced with scenery shots instead
· We ignored this because we believed the pace was acceptable with the confused nature of the scene
· This was removed and then re-filmed with more lighting, in exactly the same concept
· We added a few extra snippets of the lake shot towards the end of the scene
Timeline
Divided Timeline
T1) 0:00- 0:17 Summit Entertainment
T2) 0:18-0:21Global Studio Productions
T3) 0:22-0:26 James Clifford

T4) 0:27-0:32 Sarah Maerz
T7)0:43-0:47 Megan Laner-Hoskins
T9) 0:53-0:57 Screenplay from Benjamin Tin
T10) 0:58-1:00 Casting Gina Brookes
T11) 1:05-1:07 Music by Ben Clarkson
T12) 1:08-1:11 Costume desiner Emma Ley
T14) 1:16:1:20 Produced by Stepen Leadwater
T15) 1:42-1:48 Directed by Bill Mertz

T1) 0:00- 0:17 Summit Entertainment
T2) 0:18-0:21Global Studio Productions
T3) 0:22-0:26 James Clifford

T4) 0:27-0:32 Sarah Maerz
T5) 0:33-0:38 Hariet Carter
T6) 0:39-0:42 Dominic Punt
T8) 0:48-0:52 Divided
T9) 0:53-0:57 Screenplay from Benjamin Tin
T10) 0:58-1:00 Casting Gina Brookes
T11) 1:05-1:07 Music by Ben Clarkson
T12) 1:08-1:11 Costume desiner Emma Ley
T13) 1:12-1:15 Editor Patrick Greene
T15) 1:42-1:48 Directed by Bill Mertz

Wednesday, 11 December 2013
Character Profiles
Here is a light-hearted intake into our characters introduced in the opening scene.
Sunday, 8 December 2013
First cut of Divided
Divided first edit
Here is our first edit of Divided
Here is our first edit of Divided
Thursday, 5 December 2013
Font of Titles
Font Research
During the process of making our opening sequence we decided to change the title from 'Troubled Diversity' to 'Divided'
As we changed the title we have now an opportunity to actually split the title 'Divided' and make it really effective, to give us our extra chance to get full marks with our opening scene.
On Adobe Premier we have been trying to experiment with the idea of actually splitting the word 'Divided'
An example of this would be the title of prison break, as it is divided in the middle and gives the same effect that we want to our opening scene. The idea that something isn't quite right with Chris' life.
During the process of making our opening sequence we decided to change the title from 'Troubled Diversity' to 'Divided'
As we changed the title we have now an opportunity to actually split the title 'Divided' and make it really effective, to give us our extra chance to get full marks with our opening scene.
On Adobe Premier we have been trying to experiment with the idea of actually splitting the word 'Divided'
An example of this would be the title of prison break, as it is divided in the middle and gives the same effect that we want to our opening scene. The idea that something isn't quite right with Chris' life.
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